1. Avery Wohleb
2. Bowie High School dress code
3. "Students should be aware of the consequences of wearing certain items, such as "bullies" tugging their pants down."
4. That colored hair is a sight possible distraction
5. No, they were very straight forward about their opinion, saying that it's not fair for dress code to be so strict.
6. No, there is not quotes
7. She wrote in 1st person
1. Calista Woodall
2. Our rainforests
3. "When humans do this it takes away the homes of all the precious animals
that live there. Truthfully try to imagine yourself as a bird or a
squirrel peacefully living in your home and then you hear a chainsaw
coming out of nowhere and cutting your tree (your home) down."
4. She didn't really have an other side about the topic
5. No, she was very straight forward about the rainforest and cutting them down and ruining homes for animals.
6. No there wasn't any quotes
7. she wrote in 1st person.
Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Friday, October 24, 2014
OPINIONS WRITING PREVIEW
SCHOOL CAFETERIA FOOD:
The one thing most students say about school food is that, it's disgusting. Not many people have a taste for school lunches for breakfast, its the taste and look of it that scares off the students. S.O.S is that the students say when they are in the lunch line waiting for death to happen in their stomachs.
Spaghetti, sandwiches, pizza, chicken nuggets, etc. I've had school lunch and some of it is not all that bad but also i gag at the smell of it. Austin AISD took some of the food away that we actually liked because it wasn't healthy, but is the food they're serving us now really healthy? or is it worse? Nobody really knows except for the people that make it for us, but i guess it's not that bad sense they're serving it to us.
I've heard the craziest things ever about cafeteria food, some you can believe but then some are too crazy to even process. "One time in third grade i found a band aide in my rice, and it had blood on it", "There was a piece of hair in my spaghetti", "i heard that the chicken nuggets are made out of horse meat". All these things have been said, but how many are true? I honestly don't really like the food but i do like their meatballs and mac and cheese, i used to love their hotdogs but sadly hotdogs was taken of the menu when the UN healthy stuff was taken away.
The one thing most students say about school food is that, it's disgusting. Not many people have a taste for school lunches for breakfast, its the taste and look of it that scares off the students. S.O.S is that the students say when they are in the lunch line waiting for death to happen in their stomachs.
Spaghetti, sandwiches, pizza, chicken nuggets, etc. I've had school lunch and some of it is not all that bad but also i gag at the smell of it. Austin AISD took some of the food away that we actually liked because it wasn't healthy, but is the food they're serving us now really healthy? or is it worse? Nobody really knows except for the people that make it for us, but i guess it's not that bad sense they're serving it to us.
I've heard the craziest things ever about cafeteria food, some you can believe but then some are too crazy to even process. "One time in third grade i found a band aide in my rice, and it had blood on it", "There was a piece of hair in my spaghetti", "i heard that the chicken nuggets are made out of horse meat". All these things have been said, but how many are true? I honestly don't really like the food but i do like their meatballs and mac and cheese, i used to love their hotdogs but sadly hotdogs was taken of the menu when the UN healthy stuff was taken away.
CURRENT EVENT QUIZ 2.7
1. Same Sex schools started in Austin because, it was mainly for them to be more focused on school work and to be focusing on their futures, some of the girls schools have the smallest percentage rate of students failing.
2. Dr. Graig Spencer was the doctor that first confirmed ebola.
3. The current favorite to become our new governor is Greg Abbott. He is ahead in the poll by 16 points.
4. Vince Young's new job title would be a Diversity Salesman. Vince was one of the greatest football players to play for the longhorns and now for 2 months he has been working as a development officer for alumni relations.
5. I would want the Blue Tooth speaker, mainly because I've always wanted a speaker and this one is wireless and works from your phone, so if I'm sitting down and i don't like the song i don't have to get up and change it.
SHORT ANSWER:
left thinks its in shambles and the right thinks its in shambles because of Obama. Left r democrat and right is republican
Well the left thinks that its in trouble and the right thinks they're in trouble because of Obama. The left is the democrat with Obama and the right is the republican.
2. Dr. Graig Spencer was the doctor that first confirmed ebola.
3. The current favorite to become our new governor is Greg Abbott. He is ahead in the poll by 16 points.
4. Vince Young's new job title would be a Diversity Salesman. Vince was one of the greatest football players to play for the longhorns and now for 2 months he has been working as a development officer for alumni relations.
5. I would want the Blue Tooth speaker, mainly because I've always wanted a speaker and this one is wireless and works from your phone, so if I'm sitting down and i don't like the song i don't have to get up and change it.
SHORT ANSWER:
left thinks its in shambles and the right thinks its in shambles because of Obama. Left r democrat and right is republican
Well the left thinks that its in trouble and the right thinks they're in trouble because of Obama. The left is the democrat with Obama and the right is the republican.
Tuesday, October 21, 2014
OPINION WRITING
Dress Code
1. Doesn't say
2. Dress code and what students think about dress code
3. "The dress code is frankly, stupid. Nobody is going to "pantsed", this isn't middle school, and it;s fairly offensive that our staff thinks we behave like pre-pubescent children
4. They addressed that other people think it's stupid too, and not fair
5. well they said that we need to be aware that if they change dress code it would change thousands of peoples lives but they didn't say if it was in a good way or not.
6. "My-my, the surprisingly large amount of hair on those legs makes me want to look at them all day."
7. They used 2nd person
Counselors have electives saying "Et tu, Brute?"
1. Ashlee Thomason
2. It's about counselors and what they have to do with students and electives and also that students have no idea what to choose and what they have to give up.
3. Their opinion is that we have to give up some things we wanna do to to something else, and that we have way too much trouble trying to fix our schedules
4. No not really it was mainly what they thought,
5. No, they where good on what they thought about the problem
6. No, there's no quotes in this story
7. they used 1st person
The Summer Blues
1. Gabby Bourgeacq
2, Summer Homework
3. Their opinion was that it's not fair to have homework in the summer
4. They didn't address anything on the other side,
5. No, they were set on what they thought about summer homework
6. No quotes in this story
7. They used 1st person
Racism here at home
1. Justice Capello
2. That here we still have racism
3. they didn't really have one, it;s just telling an event
4. No they did not
5. NO because they barely had an opinion in the first place
6, No there is no quotes in this story
7. they wrote this story in 3rd point of view
School improvements lacking
1, Michelle McDonagh
2. The improvements in the school and other ones
3. That she has seen good improvements and ones that she doesn't reallt understand
4. She is saying that what needs to be fixed around school and what stays the same
5. no, i think she stayed on her opinion and talked about what she thought should be fixed,
6. No, there is no quotes in this story
7. this story is in !st person
A. I think the difference is that with hard news stories they have more information and its a more harsh topic and also they have quotes and other people's opinion in the story
B. Maybe because there isn't really a photo to go with the story like with sports stories or class stories but with these it's a little harder to get photos.
C. My three topics for a good opinion piece would be, What students think about school presentations, How teachers should teach, and School cafeteria food.
Monday, October 20, 2014
CURRENT EVENT QUIZ 2.6
1. Poeple who live in Travis county shuld go to travuscountryclerk.org, or a voting. For early voting starts today and runs thorugh Oct 31. '
2. Whole foods is launching a series of ADS because, they're tryinf to add higher quality to their brands and products. Also so people would know it's not expensive and it's possible to shop there, the ads should show that they have great vaule.
3. District Champions have an advantage because they're using their home field, he coaches from both schools flipped a coin to agree on the site or not.
4. People would find vintage books and old records, art glass, sport cards, old vintage toys, and even musical insturments. The City- wide sale should be this weekend at 10 a.m- 5p.m, saturday 11 a.m.-5p.m. and sunday. Admission is ^ dollars and children under 12 get in free. At eh Palmer event Center, 900 Barton Springs Road. I have not been to a Cit Wide sale, but this does sounds really interesting to maybe i'll go and check it out.
5. I think little girls shouldn't wear lie miley cyrus costumes maybe or anything like that but if its something simple then it should do, just becuase she has a toy gun doesn't mean she'll become a gang member when she grows up, it's just a toy gun.
SHORT ANSWER: I think voting is important, because we need a say on who runs our town or state, nobody can just pick who it is. Not everybody is going to pick the same person, a lot of people are going to have disagreements. I know my parents vote, but i don't know who they vote for. I think a good citizen to run our town should have a nice personality and be able to speak their mind with no issues and care about everyone in our town no matter what race or sex. I usually don't pay attention to election but sometimes when i try to i don't understand what the big deal is but probably because i don't know the background information.
1. Poeple who live in Travis county shuld go to travuscountryclerk.org, or a voting. For early voting starts today and runs thorugh Oct 31. '
2. Whole foods is launching a series of ADS because, they're tryinf to add higher quality to their brands and products. Also so people would know it's not expensive and it's possible to shop there, the ads should show that they have great vaule.
3. District Champions have an advantage because they're using their home field, he coaches from both schools flipped a coin to agree on the site or not.
4. People would find vintage books and old records, art glass, sport cards, old vintage toys, and even musical insturments. The City- wide sale should be this weekend at 10 a.m- 5p.m, saturday 11 a.m.-5p.m. and sunday. Admission is ^ dollars and children under 12 get in free. At eh Palmer event Center, 900 Barton Springs Road. I have not been to a Cit Wide sale, but this does sounds really interesting to maybe i'll go and check it out.
5. I think little girls shouldn't wear lie miley cyrus costumes maybe or anything like that but if its something simple then it should do, just becuase she has a toy gun doesn't mean she'll become a gang member when she grows up, it's just a toy gun.
SHORT ANSWER: I think voting is important, because we need a say on who runs our town or state, nobody can just pick who it is. Not everybody is going to pick the same person, a lot of people are going to have disagreements. I know my parents vote, but i don't know who they vote for. I think a good citizen to run our town should have a nice personality and be able to speak their mind with no issues and care about everyone in our town no matter what race or sex. I usually don't pay attention to election but sometimes when i try to i don't understand what the big deal is but probably because i don't know the background information.
EARTHQUAKE STORY
Monday morning around 8:12 a.m. in San Fransisco Bay area, an earthquake shook the place.
On 2342 Plum St, McHenry's Auto Supply store half way collasped, 6 people where injured and two other people died, Jennifer Vu from public information from Hayward Fire Department said. Any other information will not be given out due to the notification to the families.
The resident of the apartment across the street from the Auto store, Mike Beamer, said for 30 seconds almost he felt a rolling then in the middle a big jolt. "I was eating my breakfast when I felt a rumble through the room, i reacted by jumping under the table and just as i did that, i heard an explosion coming from across then, a chunk of cement flew through y kitchen window" said Beamer.
Hayward firefighters did a search through the shop and checked for a gas leak of any kind, the firefighters used ropes to secure the shop in place and make sure it won't collapse anymore. After the building collapsed Twenty-one fire personnel, Twelve police officers, and Five American Red Cross workers came, some responded four minuets after the earthquake.
Out of the 6 people injured, 3 were to taken to Hayward General Hospital, who where seriously injured according to V. No other people on sight where injured or reported. All the way to Los Angeles to far north to Redding felt the earthquake.
Sunday, October 19, 2014
HUNTINGTON STORY
On Wednesday, around 10 p.m, 53 year old Janice Jones who lives in Barstow, California in a motor home was eating pork chops when her dog knocked her 9 mm handgun off the table which shot her right through the leg. While the bullet went though Jones leg, it managed to go through the left side of her motor home, if the bullet it two more inches to the gas tank, it would of been a lot worse.
Jones was transported by ambulance to Huntington Beach Hospital, then was sent to Irvine Medical Center. No other information was given.
Jones' dog named Tombo (Pomeranian), was taken care of at Huntington Beach Animal Control, according to Janet Ngo who was one of the Animal Control officers had seen fresh cigarette burns on the dogs forehead. "It could have done with a little less abuse and a few more of those pork chops", Ngo said. Jones' office was looking at filing an animal abuse charge over Jones', indicated Ngo.
California Highway Patrol press Tammy Rye, had noticed that Jones' plates on her car where expired, the district attorney's office was considering charging Jones' for the gun accident considering that Jones' did not have a permit for the gun.
STUDENT OF THE MONTH
Student of the month is for students who are involved in many activities and helps out with the school, they don't just have to get good grades, it's not just about the grades but students who are great students. The students should be in clubs, sports, leadership maybe and also volunteer for the school or outside of school. The teachers recommend or pick their best students who they think should be student of the month.
There are certain people picked for student of the month, all the people who are chosen for this event, their picture has been hung up in the show room at Bowie High School in the Library. Seyi Odufuye was one of the students chosen for this month.
"I'm wonderful and perfect in every way possible" student of the month Seyi Odufuye said.
Seyi became student of the month because she's perfect in every way, and wonderful.
" I was inspired by myself"
Seyi wasn't inspired by anyone such as her friends or family or teachers, but she was inspired by herself.
" I wasn't really surprised because my competition wasn't really competition"
The other people Seyi went up against wasn't really complicated for her because she didn't see them as competition
" I'm better then everybody else"
One of the reasons why Seyi was chosen for student of the month rather then other people is becasue shes better then everyone else
"from a friend"
Seyi didn't hear student of the month from a teacher or a councilor but she heard it from a friend who was a former student of the month
"just be myself"
To be student of the month, Seyi didn't really have to do much to get this honor all she had to do was be herself.
"No, because i was already looked at"
Many people already look at Seyi as a great person, so people don't really look at her differently sense the student of the month award.
"all the time"
Although people already asked her for advice before student of the month, more and more people have been recently asking more advice from her.
"it recognizes how perfect i am"
Sense Student of the month went to Seyi she's been loving it because students and teachers recognize how perfect she is.
"mine is to make sure everybody is like me"
Responsibilities was a huge part of being chosen for student of the month, now that she won the award she has responsibilities pilling on her every chance she has.
There are certain people picked for student of the month, all the people who are chosen for this event, their picture has been hung up in the show room at Bowie High School in the Library. Seyi Odufuye was one of the students chosen for this month.
"I'm wonderful and perfect in every way possible" student of the month Seyi Odufuye said.
Seyi became student of the month because she's perfect in every way, and wonderful.
" I was inspired by myself"
Seyi wasn't inspired by anyone such as her friends or family or teachers, but she was inspired by herself.
" I wasn't really surprised because my competition wasn't really competition"
The other people Seyi went up against wasn't really complicated for her because she didn't see them as competition
" I'm better then everybody else"
One of the reasons why Seyi was chosen for student of the month rather then other people is becasue shes better then everyone else
"from a friend"
Seyi didn't hear student of the month from a teacher or a councilor but she heard it from a friend who was a former student of the month
"just be myself"
To be student of the month, Seyi didn't really have to do much to get this honor all she had to do was be herself.
"No, because i was already looked at"
Many people already look at Seyi as a great person, so people don't really look at her differently sense the student of the month award.
"all the time"
Although people already asked her for advice before student of the month, more and more people have been recently asking more advice from her.
"it recognizes how perfect i am"
Sense Student of the month went to Seyi she's been loving it because students and teachers recognize how perfect she is.
"mine is to make sure everybody is like me"
Responsibilities was a huge part of being chosen for student of the month, now that she won the award she has responsibilities pilling on her every chance she has.
Wednesday, October 8, 2014
CURRENT EVENT QUIZ 2.5
1. The percentage of Texas students that are college is considered 33.%. These test scores have been the lowest test scores for more than 20 years.
2. let's go austin group have spent the most money, around $840,00. They have more money coming it and will keep getting money in for the campaign.
3. Webb MIddle School is using a nonprofit program and is being a model of a community school. An 8th grader is wishing to be president of student body and wises to go to Berkley, New York, or University of california and thanks to this program he probably can.
4. A big change in sanitation for canners this year is that washing a jar lid is the same thing as washing them, putting the can in hot water saves them time.
5. My top things to do is the Photo Gallery because i love looking at all different type of photos and discover photographers
I think the ruling is stupid, everyone should be able to marry the person they love nobody what sex, everyone is the same we are all human so let them be. They have the right to be heard, everyone does, the court needs to think about it on their side of view, and understand is all they want is them to hear them out.
1. The percentage of Texas students that are college is considered 33.%. These test scores have been the lowest test scores for more than 20 years.
2. let's go austin group have spent the most money, around $840,00. They have more money coming it and will keep getting money in for the campaign.
3. Webb MIddle School is using a nonprofit program and is being a model of a community school. An 8th grader is wishing to be president of student body and wises to go to Berkley, New York, or University of california and thanks to this program he probably can.
4. A big change in sanitation for canners this year is that washing a jar lid is the same thing as washing them, putting the can in hot water saves them time.
5. My top things to do is the Photo Gallery because i love looking at all different type of photos and discover photographers
I think the ruling is stupid, everyone should be able to marry the person they love nobody what sex, everyone is the same we are all human so let them be. They have the right to be heard, everyone does, the court needs to think about it on their side of view, and understand is all they want is them to hear them out.
Monday, October 6, 2014
LONE STAR DISPATCH
F1 'STEMS's into school curriculum
Who: Mazda, Joel Miller
What: Joel Miller (Race Car driver) and a speaker with Mazda spoke to students who would want to be apart of the world of racing. They're starting a program called STEM ( Science Technology Engineering, and Math). They explained how Racing works with the cars and pit crew.
Where: Bowie High School Auditorium
When: September 16th at Bowie, and September 17th at Akins
Why: To help get a great vision and understanding of race cars, and the process
How: Giving a Speech and Presentation with a car itself
Joel Miller (Race car driver) and a speaker from Mazda came to Bowie High School, to Present and give a speak about the understanding of race cars and the process. During they're presentation, they talked to the students about a program they have called STEM (Science Technology Engineering, and Math). The program is mainly for students who are interested into working with NASCAR in the future or any other racing process etc.
Rule changes lead to new game experience
Who: Students who were making messes at games
What: At Varsity football games, the students were making messes and distractions to the game with sill string, baby powder, whistles, and crowd surfing. Which is not aloud anymore, even backpacks got banned to bring to games. Officials now work at games to look out for that stuff but also for language and rude comments.
Where: Burger Stadium, Austin Texas
When: Recently
Why: The teachers felt as fit the noise makers and silly string and comments to the field were being a distraction to the players on the field.
How: Throwing baby powder and sill string, blowing on whistles, using noise makers, and crowd surfing
In the Student section at varsity football games tend to throw baby powder in the air and use silly string, also crown surf. To the teachers this is unacceptable also while the poor language and rude comments and yelling to the field. To the footballs player, they love everything the student do for them it pumps them up and gets the players excited, they love their support to the team. The players claim that they can't even hear the comments or yelling mainly just the band, now they've made rules for this stuff some of the players are kind of sad that they won't get the kind of support they used to get.
Who: Mazda, Joel Miller
What: Joel Miller (Race Car driver) and a speaker with Mazda spoke to students who would want to be apart of the world of racing. They're starting a program called STEM ( Science Technology Engineering, and Math). They explained how Racing works with the cars and pit crew.
Where: Bowie High School Auditorium
When: September 16th at Bowie, and September 17th at Akins
Why: To help get a great vision and understanding of race cars, and the process
How: Giving a Speech and Presentation with a car itself
Joel Miller (Race car driver) and a speaker from Mazda came to Bowie High School, to Present and give a speak about the understanding of race cars and the process. During they're presentation, they talked to the students about a program they have called STEM (Science Technology Engineering, and Math). The program is mainly for students who are interested into working with NASCAR in the future or any other racing process etc.
Rule changes lead to new game experience
Who: Students who were making messes at games
What: At Varsity football games, the students were making messes and distractions to the game with sill string, baby powder, whistles, and crowd surfing. Which is not aloud anymore, even backpacks got banned to bring to games. Officials now work at games to look out for that stuff but also for language and rude comments.
Where: Burger Stadium, Austin Texas
When: Recently
Why: The teachers felt as fit the noise makers and silly string and comments to the field were being a distraction to the players on the field.
How: Throwing baby powder and sill string, blowing on whistles, using noise makers, and crowd surfing
In the Student section at varsity football games tend to throw baby powder in the air and use silly string, also crown surf. To the teachers this is unacceptable also while the poor language and rude comments and yelling to the field. To the footballs player, they love everything the student do for them it pumps them up and gets the players excited, they love their support to the team. The players claim that they can't even hear the comments or yelling mainly just the band, now they've made rules for this stuff some of the players are kind of sad that they won't get the kind of support they used to get.
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