inverted pyramid:
-LEDE IMPORTANT at the top
Hard news style
5 W'S 1 H
who how
what
where
why
when
HOW and WHY don't need to be answered in the lede.
-NUT GRAF
-"QUOTE (DIRECT)"
-FACTUAL STATEMENT
"QUOTE(DIRECT)"
JUST KEEP GOING!
LESS IMPORTANT at the bottom
WHO- who was in this story? who was the participants in this problem? Roger Clementine, John Jacob Jingleheimer-Smith, Melba Jingleheimer-Smith
WHAT- A car accident occurred
WHERE- Austin, Texas 1st street and slaughter lane
WHEN- Tuesday afternoon @ 4:45pm
WHY- the 13 year old boy was illegaly driving
HOW- does a 13 year old boy really know how to drive? maybe that's whats wrong
CAR ACCIDENT
LEDE- Tuesday afternoon around 4:45pm, a car accident occurred, on 1st street and Slaughter Lane. Roger Clementine is the 13 year old boy who was driving and got in the accident, Jacob and Melba Smith both 91 and 67 were in the accident as well and injured. Both were taken to the hospital while Mr.Smith was taking on a serious head injury. While only Clementine only suffered a few cuts on his face but was taken to the hospital but then released.
NUT GRAF- Clementine was going 60 mph, going west in the eastbound lane on slaughter lane, which is the wrong way. Mr. and Mrs. Smith were going 10 mph in the far eastbound lane of slaughter heading east. Clementine was cited by the police for driving without a liscense, speeding, and driving in the wrong lane.
"I was on the other side of the road in traffic and this kid was going so fast in maybe at lest a 40 mph limit" said witness Mary Ann
The road Clementine was driving was way below the sped limit of what the speed he was going. Which was about 20 mph over what he was supposed to be driving.
" When i first got called on the job I didn't realize that it was a 13 year old driving the car" said the Police officer first called.
When you see a car speeding down the wrong side of the road, you don't really think of a 13 year old driving the car, people would probably think. Where's the parents?
"The old couple shouldn't of been driving 10mph on a 40mph road, this road is for fast traffic not slow driving with no traffic" witness Michael Johnson said.
A road that's a main road and the speed limit is 40mph should always go 40mph, not any slower, it's 40 for a reason.
" I feel really bad for the housband, getting a serious head injury at the age of 91 must be really harsh", Brittany longstock said
Tuesday, September 30, 2014
Friday, September 26, 2014
CURRENT EVENT QUIZ #4
1. Rick perry gave $222 million dollars to 11 companies to file application.
2. The little boy wandered away because, he probably wanted to see his grandma in the apparement complex buliding.
3. THe asking price for the rifle is $25,000, there were 3 bids in and somebody topped the 25,00o dollars.
4. MAtt Dickey had the key interception to the winning game for bowie agaisnt Austin HIgh.
5. A negative thing about it is that it flys in places it shouldn't and the positive thing is that it can fly really high up
1. Rick perry gave $222 million dollars to 11 companies to file application.
2. The little boy wandered away because, he probably wanted to see his grandma in the apparement complex buliding.
3. THe asking price for the rifle is $25,000, there were 3 bids in and somebody topped the 25,00o dollars.
4. MAtt Dickey had the key interception to the winning game for bowie agaisnt Austin HIgh.
5. A negative thing about it is that it flys in places it shouldn't and the positive thing is that it can fly really high up
Wednesday, September 24, 2014
MY FIRST INTERVIEW
SCHOOL UNIFORMS:
1. Why do you think bowie now has to wear uniforms?
2. Do you think it would be better for the school and why?
3. What do you think about the new uniforms?
4. If you could change the uniform, what would you change it too?
5. When do you think would be a good time to start wearing them?
6. How do you think the uniform will change the school?
7. Who do you know who actually likes the new uniform?
8. Now that we have uniforms, do you think it'll be hard to express your personality?
9. Will it be easier getting ready in morning, already knowing what your going to wear?
10. How do you think the uniforms will help you in school?
11. Do you think parents will be happy about this, Explain?
12. Will students actually pay attention to the uniforms?
13. Do you think that every year they take away more freedom at school? and this is just the beginning?
14. Will ya'll take a stand to uniforms and rebel?
15. How do you think this will effect you?
16. Should we have at least one day of the week were we can wear whatever? and why?
17. What's the worst thing about dress code?
18. Do the teachers' agree with the AISD about uniforms?
19. What do you think happened to make AISD give us uniforms?
20. Will the uniforms last?
SOURCE: Parents, students, dress code lady, teachers, someone who gets dress coded a lot, principal.
STUDENT OF THE MONTH:
Q: How did you get to be student of the month?
A: Because I'm wonderful and perfect in every way possible.
Q: Did anyone inspire you to be student of the month? and who?
A: I was inspired by myself
Q: What was your reaction when you found out that your student of the month?
A: I wasn't surprised because my competition wasn't really a competition.
Q: Why you for student of the month?
A: Because I'm better then everybody else
Q: Where did you find out bout student of the month?
A: From a friend
Q: What did you have to do?
A: Just be myself
Q: Do people look at you differently?
A: No. because i was already looked at.
Q: Do people ad for advice?
A: All the time
Q: Do you like being student of the month?
A: Yes, Because it recognizes how perfect i am
Q: Do you more responsiblities?
A: Mine is to make sure everybody is like me
1. Why do you think bowie now has to wear uniforms?
2. Do you think it would be better for the school and why?
3. What do you think about the new uniforms?
4. If you could change the uniform, what would you change it too?
5. When do you think would be a good time to start wearing them?
6. How do you think the uniform will change the school?
7. Who do you know who actually likes the new uniform?
8. Now that we have uniforms, do you think it'll be hard to express your personality?
9. Will it be easier getting ready in morning, already knowing what your going to wear?
10. How do you think the uniforms will help you in school?
11. Do you think parents will be happy about this, Explain?
12. Will students actually pay attention to the uniforms?
13. Do you think that every year they take away more freedom at school? and this is just the beginning?
14. Will ya'll take a stand to uniforms and rebel?
15. How do you think this will effect you?
16. Should we have at least one day of the week were we can wear whatever? and why?
17. What's the worst thing about dress code?
18. Do the teachers' agree with the AISD about uniforms?
19. What do you think happened to make AISD give us uniforms?
20. Will the uniforms last?
SOURCE: Parents, students, dress code lady, teachers, someone who gets dress coded a lot, principal.
STUDENT OF THE MONTH:
Q: How did you get to be student of the month?
A: Because I'm wonderful and perfect in every way possible.
Q: Did anyone inspire you to be student of the month? and who?
A: I was inspired by myself
Q: What was your reaction when you found out that your student of the month?
A: I wasn't surprised because my competition wasn't really a competition.
Q: Why you for student of the month?
A: Because I'm better then everybody else
Q: Where did you find out bout student of the month?
A: From a friend
Q: What did you have to do?
A: Just be myself
Q: Do people look at you differently?
A: No. because i was already looked at.
Q: Do people ad for advice?
A: All the time
Q: Do you like being student of the month?
A: Yes, Because it recognizes how perfect i am
Q: Do you more responsiblities?
A: Mine is to make sure everybody is like me
Tuesday, September 16, 2014
CURRENT EVENT QUIZ:
1. It's the day of the Mexican Independence where Mexico's war gained independence from Spain. It's also a day to celebrate and thank all the hard work Mexicans do. In Mexico, South of the capital there are street performances and dancers dancing on a stage, Also traditional Mexican music. Man people also may dress up for this holiday and celebration.
2. PETA is worries about people giving away unwanted dogs, because other owners may kill unwanted dogs and not take care of the. Some ex- owners may go to online websites such as craigslist who are dealing with dogharmers possibly, they don't know the people that they're giving their dogs too. Many people out there are looking for animals just to abuse for entertainment, it's like a magnet to them.
3. Minecraft the hit game on Xbox and top seller in the Apple IOS is wanted by Microsoft for 2.5 million dollars alone. This best selling game released in 2009 has been downloaded over 100 times on PC
1. It's the day of the Mexican Independence where Mexico's war gained independence from Spain. It's also a day to celebrate and thank all the hard work Mexicans do. In Mexico, South of the capital there are street performances and dancers dancing on a stage, Also traditional Mexican music. Man people also may dress up for this holiday and celebration.
2. PETA is worries about people giving away unwanted dogs, because other owners may kill unwanted dogs and not take care of the. Some ex- owners may go to online websites such as craigslist who are dealing with dogharmers possibly, they don't know the people that they're giving their dogs too. Many people out there are looking for animals just to abuse for entertainment, it's like a magnet to them.
3. Minecraft the hit game on Xbox and top seller in the Apple IOS is wanted by Microsoft for 2.5 million dollars alone. This best selling game released in 2009 has been downloaded over 100 times on PC
Friday, September 12, 2014
ETHICS:
PUBLISHING DRUNK DRIVERS' PHOTOS-
Don White a writer for the newspaper in Anderson County, Ky, is always getting calls from people begging him to take their names of the court list in the paper . White didn't do as they asked he firmly kept it there to show people about drunk driving. On December 31st of 1998, people who read The Anderson News read the headline of the paper which read " HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR" "but please don't drink and drive and risk having you picture published", white explained that staring in January of 1998 The Anderson News will start publishing Drunk drivers mug shots in the newspaper. Most of the people hate having their name and photo in the newspaper for drunk driving, but the newspaper was hoping it would keep people from drinking and driving.
THE MEDIA'S FOUL BALL-
In 2003 the Chicago Cubs were 5 outs from going to the world series, for the very first time sense 1945. When a fan for the Chicago Cubs in the stands tried to catch a foul ball, which coast the world series for the Cubs. The Florida Marlins won that game, and the guy who tried catching the ball was thrown out by security and yelled at by a bunch of very angry fans who threw beer at him. The fan wasn't recognized till shown on television during the replays, the media have been deciding on rather not they should show the world who cost the wolf series for the Chicago cubs.
Controversy over a Concert-
In 2004, three former Eagles Rock Band members came to Denver during the election campaign to help raise money for U.S candidate. John Tepmle the editor for the Rocky Mountain News, told his staff not to go to the fundraising concert, due to not being able to go because of all newsroom employees from making political donations. They also will not be aloud to attend nay other fundraising concerts during the political month. Many of the employes are trying to make ways to go, asking if they can buy tickets and go themselves.
PUBLISHING DRUNK DRIVERS' PHOTOS-
Don White a writer for the newspaper in Anderson County, Ky, is always getting calls from people begging him to take their names of the court list in the paper . White didn't do as they asked he firmly kept it there to show people about drunk driving. On December 31st of 1998, people who read The Anderson News read the headline of the paper which read " HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR" "but please don't drink and drive and risk having you picture published", white explained that staring in January of 1998 The Anderson News will start publishing Drunk drivers mug shots in the newspaper. Most of the people hate having their name and photo in the newspaper for drunk driving, but the newspaper was hoping it would keep people from drinking and driving.
THE MEDIA'S FOUL BALL-
In 2003 the Chicago Cubs were 5 outs from going to the world series, for the very first time sense 1945. When a fan for the Chicago Cubs in the stands tried to catch a foul ball, which coast the world series for the Cubs. The Florida Marlins won that game, and the guy who tried catching the ball was thrown out by security and yelled at by a bunch of very angry fans who threw beer at him. The fan wasn't recognized till shown on television during the replays, the media have been deciding on rather not they should show the world who cost the wolf series for the Chicago cubs.
Controversy over a Concert-
In 2004, three former Eagles Rock Band members came to Denver during the election campaign to help raise money for U.S candidate. John Tepmle the editor for the Rocky Mountain News, told his staff not to go to the fundraising concert, due to not being able to go because of all newsroom employees from making political donations. They also will not be aloud to attend nay other fundraising concerts during the political month. Many of the employes are trying to make ways to go, asking if they can buy tickets and go themselves.
Wednesday, September 10, 2014
CURRENT EVENT QUIZ:
1. Austin Police Department are taking training for dogs because man u dog shootings have been happening when a dog is running towards them, but the police officers don't know the difference between a dog attacking or a dog just running, A dog attacking is when it's running and their ears are up and tails and teeth are showing.
2. About 3 workers have been treated, and
3. The family is suining because the 9 year old boy got struct by lightning during soccer practice, that should of been canceled due to weather safety precautions. The little boy has server and permeant damage, the boy is unable to speak, hear, talk or move due to the lightning.Also three other kids in elementary school were injured but not as bad as Alex. All the kids ere taken to Dell Children's hospital but Alex got further treatment. A Facebook page, and a website that has raised around 12,000 dollars for Alex's family.
4. Two major reales that are coming to release is the iphone6 and iphone6 plus and watch, the watch will be called the Smartwatch, the value of the watch is starting at $349. Many people are raging from this new upcoming release.
5. Ray Rice is in trouble with the NFL because earlier in the year him and his girlfriend at the time went to las vegas as a trip, in the elevator apparently mad at her he punched her straight in the face and knocked her out. Also known as Domestic Violence, the video was posted and the NFL saw it and got mad.
1. Austin Police Department are taking training for dogs because man u dog shootings have been happening when a dog is running towards them, but the police officers don't know the difference between a dog attacking or a dog just running, A dog attacking is when it's running and their ears are up and tails and teeth are showing.
2. About 3 workers have been treated, and
3. The family is suining because the 9 year old boy got struct by lightning during soccer practice, that should of been canceled due to weather safety precautions. The little boy has server and permeant damage, the boy is unable to speak, hear, talk or move due to the lightning.Also three other kids in elementary school were injured but not as bad as Alex. All the kids ere taken to Dell Children's hospital but Alex got further treatment. A Facebook page, and a website that has raised around 12,000 dollars for Alex's family.
4. Two major reales that are coming to release is the iphone6 and iphone6 plus and watch, the watch will be called the Smartwatch, the value of the watch is starting at $349. Many people are raging from this new upcoming release.
5. Ray Rice is in trouble with the NFL because earlier in the year him and his girlfriend at the time went to las vegas as a trip, in the elevator apparently mad at her he punched her straight in the face and knocked her out. Also known as Domestic Violence, the video was posted and the NFL saw it and got mad.
Monday, September 8, 2014
Sunday, September 7, 2014
Whats in my name:
My characteristics are very true, i have struggle against limits ad a steady growth in life, i don't really order people around but i do ask people to do things for me sometimes. i don't really do much service but every summer i do volunteer at a church camp and help the leaders. The fact that my number is 4 is super weird because that used to be my softball number.
My soul Urge number is 11: the first thing it says about me is that my thinking and interests relate to my dreams pretty much and my imagination, which is true, i have the weirdest dreams ever and i base my imagination off of it and think about things that could yo be in life. the next thing it says is that i motivate toward idealistic concepts, and that i share my ideas with everyone mainly my parents and some of my friends, my friends tell my i have the craziest ideas ever but sometimes they actually work. I am true to my religion which it tells me, i go to bible study every Wednesday. I'm not going to say I'm physic but there are points were I'm dreaming and its of me at school eating lunch with my friends making jokes, then like a couple days later it'll happen which is really weird something from mind came to reality.
I don't really have the dream of the perfect world but i do dream of what the world should be but not really perfect, I am very idealistic of life i'm the person in the room that makes up ideas but comes up with the craziest ideas about the problem. When it says that I am extremely strong to my beliefs that's not true really, I believe in god and love but i don't really believe in the sense of marriage. "you have a very good mind that is especially well equipped to handle the higher, more abstract forms of thought", that saying about me is very true about me, i think usually think different then other people.
I started wearing makeup in 7th grade because some guy told me i needed to "to put something on my ugly face" which stung a nerve in me sense i was bullied in elementary school. I tend to wear a right amount of make up but also put in something special. So i put in all my insecurities in my makeup because it makes me feel better in life. The thing about being super sensitive and emotional is that i cry a whole bunch during movies no matter if it's even not that sad. I can take a joke but sometimes i can't because it just hurts a little no matter if a joke or not.
In those movies were there is a "chosen one" in life i feel like i am that person, like I'm special and unique that i can do anything, mainly because i can help people with any problem they have, also because i'm a dreamer like in "shark boy and lava girl". I've been told i have such a strong personality and am the life of the party.
My characteristics are very true, i have struggle against limits ad a steady growth in life, i don't really order people around but i do ask people to do things for me sometimes. i don't really do much service but every summer i do volunteer at a church camp and help the leaders. The fact that my number is 4 is super weird because that used to be my softball number.
My soul Urge number is 11: the first thing it says about me is that my thinking and interests relate to my dreams pretty much and my imagination, which is true, i have the weirdest dreams ever and i base my imagination off of it and think about things that could yo be in life. the next thing it says is that i motivate toward idealistic concepts, and that i share my ideas with everyone mainly my parents and some of my friends, my friends tell my i have the craziest ideas ever but sometimes they actually work. I am true to my religion which it tells me, i go to bible study every Wednesday. I'm not going to say I'm physic but there are points were I'm dreaming and its of me at school eating lunch with my friends making jokes, then like a couple days later it'll happen which is really weird something from mind came to reality.
I don't really have the dream of the perfect world but i do dream of what the world should be but not really perfect, I am very idealistic of life i'm the person in the room that makes up ideas but comes up with the craziest ideas about the problem. When it says that I am extremely strong to my beliefs that's not true really, I believe in god and love but i don't really believe in the sense of marriage. "you have a very good mind that is especially well equipped to handle the higher, more abstract forms of thought", that saying about me is very true about me, i think usually think different then other people.
I started wearing makeup in 7th grade because some guy told me i needed to "to put something on my ugly face" which stung a nerve in me sense i was bullied in elementary school. I tend to wear a right amount of make up but also put in something special. So i put in all my insecurities in my makeup because it makes me feel better in life. The thing about being super sensitive and emotional is that i cry a whole bunch during movies no matter if it's even not that sad. I can take a joke but sometimes i can't because it just hurts a little no matter if a joke or not.
In those movies were there is a "chosen one" in life i feel like i am that person, like I'm special and unique that i can do anything, mainly because i can help people with any problem they have, also because i'm a dreamer like in "shark boy and lava girl". I've been told i have such a strong personality and am the life of the party.
Tuesday, September 2, 2014
CURRENT EVENTS QUIZ:
1. The Austin flagship campaign donated the most money to U, UT has made so much money this year thanks to all the donations.
2. President Obama would want to propose at least $10.10 an hour for minimum wage for this year of 2015.
3. I think the political cartoon means that the eyes of Isis are awful and evil, the cartoon shows black and no other color. So i assume that the eyes mean darkness and hatred.
4. Three people died on Labor day in car accidents, one of the people died from falling of Mount Bonnel and identified as a32 Omer Kaya.
5. The quarterback for the longhorns got a head injury and sat on the sideline, fans for the longhorns were very upset, because he hasn't played the major games and the team isn't doing so well.
6. The app is free but only in the apple store for the IOS, it improves the camera, when you take a video and its shaky, hyperlapse the app helps it make it smooth and watchable. On the app you are aloud to slow down the video or speed it up in time.
1. The Austin flagship campaign donated the most money to U, UT has made so much money this year thanks to all the donations.
2. President Obama would want to propose at least $10.10 an hour for minimum wage for this year of 2015.
3. I think the political cartoon means that the eyes of Isis are awful and evil, the cartoon shows black and no other color. So i assume that the eyes mean darkness and hatred.
4. Three people died on Labor day in car accidents, one of the people died from falling of Mount Bonnel and identified as a32 Omer Kaya.
5. The quarterback for the longhorns got a head injury and sat on the sideline, fans for the longhorns were very upset, because he hasn't played the major games and the team isn't doing so well.
6. The app is free but only in the apple store for the IOS, it improves the camera, when you take a video and its shaky, hyperlapse the app helps it make it smooth and watchable. On the app you are aloud to slow down the video or speed it up in time.
The Big Day
Speeding down the road wiping the
sweat off his forehead, Connor desperately trying to get to Avery’s wedding.
Meanwhile Avery is in the bride’s dressing room in the chapel putting on the
dress of her dreams and smiling, but her thoughts make her look out with wet
window and think about Connor the man she really loves with all her heart.
Although her father sits in front of her with a misleading face, he checks his
watch and goes back to smiling at her, probably to make her think she can go
through with this.
Connor keeps racing down the slick
road while the raindrops hit the car like tiny beads. The car in front is
slowing down in the middle of the road for some reason and Connor is getting
terribly frustrate, he needs t get to Avery and stop that wedding. While he’s
almost there a train is blowing it’s whistle showing Connor that it’s coming,
Connor slams his fist into the stirring wheel and yells his anger off. Connor
does not want Avery to marry Jake at all.
Avery gets worried and worried by
the minute, while the clock mocks her on the wall, ticking. When its 6 a clock
the clock dings and dongs and the wedding bells chime, when she hears it she
realizes that its time to marry a guy she doesn’t even love. Her father shuts
the door and smiles really big, of course he’s smiling he wants this not me, my
father has always wanted me to marry Jake and not Connor, once Jake showed him
the houses his parents own, my dad couldn’t resist to make Jake fall in love
with me. All I want is to be happy with Connor but all my dad wants is Jake’s
money.
Connor is at the chapel racing up the
stairs and throws open the doors to the wedding, while Connors world crashes in
front of him by the site in front of him, Avery holding hands with Jake at the
alter exchanging vows that he wishes he was saying to Avery not Jake. Avery’s
father smirks at him from his seat, and from that he knew he’s lost everything,
he’s too late.
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