Tuesday, October 21, 2014

OPINION WRITING

Dress Code
1. Doesn't say
2. Dress code and what students think about dress code
3. "The dress code is frankly, stupid. Nobody is going to "pantsed", this isn't middle school, and it;s fairly offensive that our staff thinks we behave like pre-pubescent children
4. They addressed that other people think it's stupid too, and not fair 
5. well they said that we need to be aware that if they change dress code it would change thousands of peoples lives but they didn't say if it was in a good way or not. 
6. "My-my, the surprisingly large amount of hair on those legs makes me want to look at them all day." 
7. They used 2nd person
Counselors have electives saying "Et tu, Brute?"
1. Ashlee Thomason
2. It's about counselors and what they have to do with students and electives and also that students have no idea what to choose and what they have to give up.
3. Their opinion is that we have to give up some things we wanna do to to something else, and that we have way too much trouble trying to fix our schedules 
4. No not really it was mainly what they thought,
5. No, they where good on what they thought about the problem
6. No, there's no quotes in this story
7. they used 1st person
The Summer Blues
1. Gabby Bourgeacq
2, Summer Homework
3. Their opinion was that it's not fair to have homework in the summer
4. They didn't address anything on the other side, 
5. No, they were set on what they thought about summer homework
6. No quotes in this story
7. They used 1st person
Racism here at home
1. Justice Capello
2. That here we still have racism 
3. they didn't really have one, it;s just telling an event 
4. No they did not
5. NO because they barely had an opinion in the first place
6,  No there is no quotes in this story
7. they wrote this story in 3rd point of view
School improvements lacking
1, Michelle McDonagh
2. The improvements in the school and other ones
3. That she has seen good improvements and ones that she doesn't reallt understand
4. She is saying that what needs to be fixed around school and what stays the same
5. no, i think she stayed on her opinion and talked about what she thought should be fixed,
6. No, there is no quotes in this story
7. this story is in !st person

A. I think the difference is that with hard news stories they have more information and its a more harsh topic and also they have quotes and other people's opinion in the story

B.  Maybe because there isn't really a photo to go with the story like with sports stories or class stories but with these it's a little harder to get photos.

C. My three topics for a good opinion piece would be, What students think about school presentations, How teachers should teach, and School cafeteria food.  















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