1. in a hard news lede, it states more hard facts
2. the second paragraph
3. yes there are qoutes
4. thoughout the story yes its in the formation
5. Ted Williams, Ken Andrews, Kevin McLoughlin, Doral Chenoweth III,Tony Florentino, Shane Cormier
6. He said to me: 'Radio is
defined (as) theater of mind'
7. with small paragraphs around 29
8. 762 words in the story
9. it starts off the same and ends the same, when they talk about the voice and reuse it
10. to make it more defining and change it up a bit
11. usually you here weird stories about the homeless, but yes this was a nice change and it was really interesting
12. i wanted to hear the voice to see what it would sound like
13. you can really tell he has a voice, after the story and watching the video it was really cool the second more then the first because i could understand more.
14. i think it would lose the impact, it wouldnt be as interesting
15. yes the writer really did
16. by the voices own words with the added quotes
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