key ingredients

1. Very informative
     detailed in news writing
     made me want to read more
2. Long sentences/descriptive
    Novel writing
3. Yes, i want know what happened
4. "torn, moldy matress"
     "Long legs, emaciated chest"
     "Ribs, and collarbones jutted out" 
5. What they're bones are like
    write like a novelist
6. she's very unstable with lice, rashes, starving, sleeping on mondly matress, insect bites, ribs are popping out, sores, and no clothes
7. yes
8. it gives more information to the readers
9. yes
10. temrerature toward 100 degress
      flames where rushing
      metal grinder jumped
11. that the metal grinder jumped
      that the canyon was narrow
12. the monster
13. fixing the water pipe
14. yes
15. wildfire coasts are busting
      fire is chewing
      wildfire where increasing
16. the third one
17. yes